Vengence

by Carmen   Sep 5, 2005


I have only one thing on my mind...
A thought that's not very kind...

I know what you have done...
I watched you pull out that gun...
You pointed it at her...
The rest is but a blur...

As I stand in the rain,
Teeth gritted, face blood stained...
I know what you have done...

What did she do to deserve this?
Now, to avenge her is my only wish...

You took her life...
She was a loving mother, the perfect wife...
What's sad is, she loved you...
I know you never believe that true...
But it was...

You thought she didn't care,
That everything wasn't fair...
But you were wrong...
For this moment, I have waited long...

To avenge her...

I hold back tears as I touch the trigger...
The look on your face sends my body in shivers...
Then her scream rings through my mind,
And the reason to restrain is unable to find...
You've killed my mother...

I take a deep breath...
After this, I have nothing left...

As I stand over your lifeless body,
I begin to cry...
In my anger and fright,
The red has flooded my sight...
Not only did I lose my mother,
I've killed my brother...

~As most of you have realized already, this poem is not true. It was inspired by a movie I've watched.~

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  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Hm, at times I feltl ike it got rocky . But still a great piece of work . You didn`t just come out and say who you killed, and so and so . I liked that . The periods made pauses -- which added to the effect . Liked it .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Very well written. the flow was very good. it was full of emotion and feeling. 5/5 keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    That was very good i loved the way you wrote it i like the way it had a twist at the end thought it might be her husband 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    WOW! That is so sad...... and it takes such a turn at the end. At first I thought it was the father. But then you get to the end and it is the brother. Excellent poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I really hope this didnt happen i would go through stanzas and point out problems but someone has already done that so you dont need it again i think the form was a little odd sometimes your messed up the rhyme scheme but other then that great poem if its true which i doubt because your not in jail, your a great story writer and thats a talent that you should hold dear...good job...4/5

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