Footprints

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Sep 7, 2005


Green mountains rise in the distance.
Trees dance to the breeze's soft rhythmn.
The sun begins to set into the horizon.
Colors bleed into the sky's deepness, peaceful.
Small waves ripple the water's surface.

I walk along the ocean's shore, footprints.
Looking at the beautiful scenery, breathtaking.
Water washes upon the beach, wetting my feet.
Instinctively, I look back at my footsteps.

Looking into the past, remembering the pain.
Looking into the darkness, remembering it all.
Water washes up the shore once more,
As my footprints disappear into the sand, forgotten.

© Fighter

*this is only a draft...

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  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Hun if this is only a draft u r more amazing than i previously thought! xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Pretty darn good draft, girl. Keep this up, and you'll be famous! Great write, 5/5

    Car

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Sweetie, this is no draft. This is better then I could ever do! its excellently excellent! the imagery is like boom picture:P lol I love it, awesome work

    Love Jenn x0x0x