I Am near

Aw! thats so sweet! 5/5

Aw this is so sweet.....who/e its about is very lucky to have such a great comfort...5/5

5/5 excellnt... "blood & lamb has been slain" is slightly out of context... u could try somethin there... otherwise is very neatly done !

Omg im so in love with these kind of poems, course i would right them if i could, cause i only like writing long ones but still 5/5^_^

That was also beatiful. i think i'm going to add u to my favorites. i love the way u rite. its so...descriptive!