The knife, my only friend!

by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]   Sep 12, 2005


I feel so sad all the time
but it doesn't do any good
i wanna die really bad
i wonder if i should?

whats the point in living
when we're living just to die
I'm in pain all the time
all i do is cry!

should i die right now?
and take away the pain
or is there something out there
will happiness i ever gain?

i want to cut my wrist
and dig it in with might
wait until it bleeds a lot
then give up this fight

sit alone in a room
wait to end my life
i had no one to help me
no one but the knife!

i let everyone walk over me
there was nothing i could do
so now i will end this life
all because of you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey, thanks for your comment on mine. Don't worry though...
    This was a really good poem, I don't really like suicide poems that often because you only get one chance at life - and I just don't agree with the thought of throwing it away. Though those thoughts to have an impact on people's emotion, and that's exactly what this poem had. I know that feeling, and I don't think anyone should feel it. Anyway, what I'm trying to say is you're really good at portraying pain. Nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    Oh! Awesome poem! I luv it! Alot of people cana relate I'm sure, I know I can! Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by given up

    Dats ok i will prob email u thanx 4 sayin dat me n d guy suit it meens more 2 me now that u will eva no!!!
    xxxxxxxxxxx
    randomonosity

  • 18 years ago

    by given up

    I can relate 2 d way ur feelin but there is allways anuva way out!!! u will pull thru!! hav faith in urself!!

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Again I can relate to how you're feeling. I love the way you get across the longing for the knife, I hope it never comes to that though.

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