If Love's So Great...

by Carmen   Sep 13, 2005


If love's so great,
Why do I stay up at night,
Just to cry?
When someone asks what's wrong,
I put on a smile, and am forced to lie?

If love's so great,
Why is he always on my mind?
He treats me like dirt,
Leaving me alone,
Scarred, broken, and hurt?

If love's so great,
Why do I feel this way?
To hurt, to scar, to pain?
If it's really so great,
Why do I feel I'm going insane?

If love's so great,
Why does her happiness,
Equal mine?
When I sit and try to make a guess,
I wonder... what is love?

If love's so great,
Why am I sitting here, writing this,
Instead of enjoying you,
Your presence, your love, your kiss?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    Brilliant again proper liked it xxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Wow thats amazing it crazy thought love hurts so bad but we all want to have it ya know what i mean.. anyways 5.5 keep up the amazing work your a great writer

  • 18 years ago

    by Dave

    Your writeing gets better and better as i read on

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Awwwww very cute 5/5

  • Nice i enjoyed it.
    So many good points, i think everyone feels that way at some point.

    xxx cici xxx