The Last of Me

by Katrina Boblina   Sep 14, 2005


This suicide
brings me no pain
lying on the floor
looking so vain.

This was my choice
But my black soul cries
This was a stupid attempt
to escape all the lies.

I wish it wouldnt have ended
in a rush of blood and tears
But in my mind there was no escape
from all my haunting fears.

I wish my last day would've been
in the saftey of you arms
but insteed our last day
will be held in deaths charms

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Beautifully and richly written, some might not understand that comment, but I think you will. Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Shannon

    Oh wow! That was great! You expressed yourself so much in this poem! I love those kinds of poems. I loved the last line of the poem. It flowed just the way it should. Great job keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by JodiieBaybeh

    Wow this poem is great i really liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Wow, i liked this! It was well expressed and the flow was good, the word usage in the last stanza was my fav! I enjoyed this well done xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by wendy

    Great job i will read a few and comment and vote keep up the good work

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