What Happened?

by Kurt   Sep 15, 2005


My hear is broken in two

Vicious words and poisonous lies

All of which was done by you

This mournful chorus, the tearful cries

Now i must try to move on

Lonely depressed broken jealous

Even though all my support is gone

Friendship is forever lost between us

Maybe all this makes me stronger

Crying into a hellish sleep

Afraid to continue living a moment longer.

But no matter what your secrets i keep.

Devastated by this tragedy

I've given up to and ending of sadness.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I adore the wording used in this...simply beautiful.
    The opening stanza was very strong and really pulled me into the poem, and from there on it just got better.
    I really enjoyed this.

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    This poem is great! the words describe everything perfectly!! i like uoer work and ill add you to my faves!! keep up the brill work! nd p.s thanx 4 checking out my work!! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Excellent. Your description was great! "Vicious words”,” poisonous lies", "mournful chorus" were all great in expressing your feelings. Be careful with typos, for example "hear" in the first line. Also, did you mean to have commas in the line "Lonely depressed broken jealous", if you did, it is useful to put them in next time, simply because it helps to show what you mean.
    Good Job! Keep writing, I want to read more.

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