Everydays suffering...

by AhmadAfaneh   Sep 15, 2005


In myself, somewhere, deep inside
There are silent screams i am trying to hide
Calling you, Begging you
To come now even though you are so late
Just come here and take me out of the world i hate

God only knows how many nights I've spent
Dreaming of you while i am lying on my bed
All i wanted is the feeling of your touch on my skin
But it seems like its something I'll never get
So i am gonna try to get you out of my head

Time passes slow and i am growing fast
And i think i am not gonna meet you at last
Cause life never goes as we want
Cause life is so unjust
So I'll just give up till I rust,
Till i turn to dust

Its just so sad
When nothing is here to last
And it's something really bad
When you don't have a start
So you just wish to die and for that you are glad

And now while I'm counting, from my age, another day
I just fade away
Killing every single voice in myself
Pretending that i am deaf
And cutting deep my wrist
Waiting my soul to rest

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tisha

    OOPs forgot to add the wors POWERFUL ......sorry

  • 18 years ago

    by Tisha

    I think there is a very message with the words that you write! Keep up the great work...thanks for also commenting on my poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    Hey I love this poem, cool how it flows so well without even rhyming the whole time. I can never do that..but anyways, I especially liked the first 2 stanzas..great job! and thanks for your comments on mine..I know it's been a while sorry it took so long to get back to you

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Captivating...haunting....That was so good. The structure was something different from what I usually see but it worked. It was very, very well written and had a powerful word choice. Excellent and amazing work.
    ~The Bleeding Child

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Hey sweety
    i love this poem but at the same time it worries me alil..
    i want u to remember ur not alone okie..
    well another great poem by u..
    as always much better than a 5
    Keep writting=)

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