Breathe

by mayme   Sep 16, 2005


The sea rages inside and out
Great waves crash around
The sight of the lighthouse is gone
And the foghorn makes no sound

The night of life comes
The air fills with dread
The cold winds hit you hard
And your spiritual self seems dead

So, slowly you sink
Into the sea of trials you fall
You struggle to stay above the waves
And wearily to the Lord you call

Your burdens and mistakes cast you
Tumbling to the depths below
But as the bottom hits your feet
The Son begins to glow

"The load may be heavy my child
This is a test so don't you grieve
You may be down in the pit of this sea
But I give the breath for you to breathe."

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  • 18 years ago

    by â—ŠJâ—Š

    Thats so beautiful and it inspires us
    Great poem ;)
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Nice. i love the beginning. but not being a religious person..the end sort of loses its magic. but i love the way its written. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tempest

    I can relate to this poem alot. it's really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wonderful poem, very well worded. I love it. Keep up the great work.

    Also thanks for the comment. =D

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Wow amazing i love this so much i am really going through some hard times right now and this poem makes me feel better and want to move on thanks you for that 5.5