Valediction: On Time and Love (Part I. Pain)

by HansRik   Sep 16, 2005


Time's a liar, in whom I trusted much
And love has now betray'd my sense as well.
Oh, why! The Pain of Love is sorrowful.
The torture, time has caused is more than Hell.

For love itself is death and pain,
Which Time does caress, with futility
Filling with hopes, the man who believes,
Leaving the lover, to cry, an eternity.

And time betrays the man who loves,
And love betrays the man who trusts.

For he who loves is doomed to cry, in pain,
And he who cries has loved too much, in vain.

(C)Copyright 2005
(Hans Rik- nom de plume)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fluffy

    This again, HansRik, truly wonderful. Realistically, I agree with you and what you mean by most of your emotions towards how love can be and how its outcomes are awfully surprising at times. Once again, great writing and keep it up!

    Much love and God bless,
    FalLEn*-

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    And time betrays the man who loves,
    And love betrays the man who trusts.

    For he who loves is doomed to cry, in pain,
    And he who cries has loved too much, in vain.

    wonderfully, wonderfully written. you really have a way with words here!

    great writing! looking forward to reading more

    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    This poen was gr8..im sry u didnt get a place in my contest....u are very good tho...mayb nex time...5/5
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany01

    That was sooo insperational loved it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love it

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