Waken Up

by Katlynn   Sep 18, 2005


Tonight I'm falling for you.
tonight I'll make those wishes.
upon the sky as the fallen star.
drops into the ground.
and makes a huge sound.

like me cutting my wrists.
as you hear it going into the skin.
deeper and deeper.
by the moment.
the blood dripping down to the floor.

drip, drip, drip
the sound like the sink.
drip, drip, drip
the sound of the fear inside of me.
drip, drip, drip.
i broke a rule once again.

fallen in love i have.
but i cut myself once again.
over and over.
letting the blood get all over.
I'm getting buried in the ground.

Today i slit it to far.
today i feel inside my mess.
the nightmare came.
and i will never be waken up.
as you kiss me for the last time.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow... i really liked this... although i'm not a big fan of suicide poems this was very good and very well written.. keep it up

    sammie

  • 13 years ago

    by Juls

    Intense..but amazing! I know what you are talking about i understnad the whole cutting thing but im trying to stop. if u need to talk im here for you

    Juls

  • 13 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    I liked it...although, some of the rhyming did seem a little forced. but on the whole i thought it was very good considering i dont really like poems about suicide. but u r a great writer, keep it up! jesx

  • 13 years ago

    by Jerry Scott

    You write like Picasso paints. Very different, very good. I give you 5++

  • 13 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    Craziness... nice job!!!! i like it.