In hell's garden

by Bradley Peter   Sep 18, 2005


I tread on the stones that burn the soles of my feet
and everywhere i turn there are demons of such
so i try to keep my eyes tight shut as i walk the dreaded street
but the more i try the more i fail because my curiosity is too much

they scream and shout the souls torched in the past
seems like they're endless, there are so many
and as i concentrate on my path, i wonder if I'll last
so as i walk i wonder about my hope and if there's any

the sky is filled with thunder and lightning
the colour is familiar, the sky is blood red
i never should have been here, its so frightening
but heaven was full up, so I'm in hell now I'm dead

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Hmmm.
    this poem isnt as great as your others.
    its still great but not
    'Brad Great'
    if that makes sense, which it prob ably doesnt.
    sorry if im being vague

  • 18 years ago

    by Charles

    Nice poem, bruva.
    last stanza a bit sloppy, but thats jus cos im lookin at it 4rm a religious point of view. 5/4. chuk norris

  • 18 years ago

    by Koriey Korrupted

    Great poem.yet another success!!!!
    congrats 5/5

    lost in insanity
    fearing demons within
    giving up on humanity
    because we're all blinded by reality's sin

  • Hey, nice poem, i liked it.
    xxx cici xxx