Too depressed for words

by midnight♥lullibys   Sep 18, 2005


You tell me you love me
And yes i believe you entirely
Just know i love you too
Please know this to be true
But i just cant take the pain
Though I'm the only one to blame
Looking deep into your soul
I realize you make me whole
And that i could never survive
Without you by my side

Well i used to think that i was strong
Until the day, it all went wrong
Now breathing is a bigger task
Always thinking of the past
And now i cant even speak
Though you plead and kiss my cheek
Too depressed for words and tears
Afraid to face....all my fears...

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  • 17 years ago

    by TIRED OF LOVE

    VERY GOOD LIVED THIS POEM..

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Really good poem
    At some parts the rhyme felt forced
    but other then that it was really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Some of the rhymes I didn't like because they have been over used and the idea didn't seem to have formed very strongly throughout your poem. Not bad but I've seen you write much better.

  • 18 years ago

    by nightschild

    Another excellent poem
    i can really empathise
    keep writing your so good! :D
    xoxoxox
    ~*MaRy*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    It was a good poem that flowed..but entirely, and me, dont rhyme....but other than that is was pretty good.. cliche, but pretty good....

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