This is Me

by AllHailTheHeartbreaker   Sep 19, 2005


This is me looking at you
Pondering inside my mind
Wondering what I want
And if you want it, too.

This is me waiting for you
Leaving the rest
Waisting my time
Perhaps you'll wait, too.

This is me holding onto you
Wishing for it to last
Feeling what I feel
Hoping you feel it, too.

This is me trying to forget you
While you aren't here
I'm just a shadow
I hope you won't forget me, too.

This is me with you
Time goes on by
Life moves ahead
For you and me, too.

This is me loving you
Hidden in my heart
Praying desperately
That you love me, too.

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  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Aw this is sooooo sweeet i loved it! 5/5 nice repetition type thing

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    This is an excellent poem. I like the repetition of the words "you" and "too" which make the poem flow very well, emphasising those two words throughout. The structure is efficient, and the diction is very good. In short, very well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    I'm going to be an honest critique here (Please don't let it hurt your feelings because you know I love your poetry!! ;-;) but i didn't feel a flow, but the last line really grabbed me and i felt it deep in my heart, the poem was very very good but it just didn't have aflow to it. but you know i still liked it! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    That is a wonderful poem and i hope your relationship turns out great

    sending love

    allalone

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Wow amazing i feel this way abou tsoem one to keep your head up thats all i can say lovely job. 5.5

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