Take It Away

by Toni   Sep 19, 2005


I've had so much more than I can take
Lie down, break down, upon my bed
And I cry so hard my insides ache
Your words still flowing through my head
And I cry a little more

So come home, close the door on the world
For there's no one left to tell
You were the one who knew me the best
You pretend so very well

I've had so much more than I can take
Slip down, fall down, upon my bed
And I shake so hard I fear I will break
Your words still flowing through my head
And I die a little more

Fall down on my knees, and I know you're there
You are watching, as I fall
Down and down, it's all I that have
I scream but its *you* that I call

Sink down in despair, my face in my hands
Please will you make it go?
The world won't go away, there's too little time
Too much that you don't know

I've had so much more than I can take
Take it away and take it away
Just make it go away..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    YEAH! My xanga is www.xanga.com/Hold_Me_4_Tonight

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  • 18 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    Beautiful poem. I wish I could end your pain Toni, you don't deserve this hun. I'm here for you always.

    Love you,
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    I wish i could take it all away for you hun, and one day, it will go away, jsut dont give in, dont give up hope. i'm always going to be here for you hun, through the Thunder n Rain, Sleet and Snow... Thick and thin.

    Dont give up hope hun.
    Amazing poem hun, so sad *hugs*

    I love you so much Toni
    I'm always here if you need me

    - Oli xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    This is so beautiful =[
    I love you.
    I'd take it away if it was in my power, but I'll just stay with you through it all instead. I >LOVE< you. I hope you know that..lover =]
    -Laura.
    xxxxxx