That was so beautiful... but terribly sad... i really felt that deep inside my heart... i have to say, you've worked up to my expectation--- another spectacular piece of writing....

Love,
Ipsita

Hey not really my style
but i really liked it
ur really good

Thank you for the comments

This is a very emotional poem. :) great job keep it up. dont give up hope k. ;)

-faithfulserenity

Brilliant poem, keep it up.
Jen x

A lovely poem with nice selection of words.....good work keep it up!!! and yes thanks a ton for ur comments.

Great poem and thanks for the comment!

Really nice. even i somewhere has these feelings for the one who has stopped talking to me. so i feel that atleast friendship should go on.i enjoyed ur poem a lot. well written. dont hav much words to praise!!!!!!!
luv, bharti

Nice!!!

Hi .....very touching lines.......gud work........i enjoyed each line..........

love

ranju

Life never ends for anyone.
jeevan ke safar mein kai humsafar meel jateh hai, or kuchh pal sath nibah kar unhi rastoh mein khoh jate . lekin sacha humsafar vahi hai jo jeevan bhar sath nibhai apke liya jeeyai or apke liya marjaye.

Such a lovely poem. Well done.

I love :

But don't withdraw the touch of humanity
I'm sure someday we will meet again
In my new song or in a new poetry

I think this poem is amazing.
It's great when people want to be friends after a relationship. It sounded sad, but it wasn't. It was acceptance. I love it.

Thnx for the comment , ur an awsome writer ^_^ i love this poem