You are fake

by TeArS R FaLLiNg   Sep 20, 2005


You are so fake
i do not know you
you confuse me so much
with the things you do
you are just so cold
you do not show emotion
you are up and down
causing so much commotion
i always am there for you
make sure my love you can always feel
but the emotion you give back
do not seem real
i just do not really know you
so are you sincere or fake
because it seems you build things up
only to purposely break
like you enjoy watching me fall
and do not care when i am down
then after awhile you will help me
but the cycle just goes around
you are nice and loving
but then cold like it is a game
but now i know that
only your fake love is to blame
you do not appreciate little things
just think i will always be there
but one day you will see
i will be like you and will not care

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    I really love how this ends, i've known people like that and your poem portrays so much confusion and weariness n stuff... at least thats what i think anyway (i suck at comments) - take care xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    I can relate to this one a little bit. good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    *Tears* That was wonderful! total 5/5 I so know where your coming from it sucks like nothing else.. Stay strong and keep writing this stuffs amazing:)

    Love Jenn x0x0x

  • Great poem, 5/5. i really liked it. it kinda reminds me of this one friend i have. well please rate and comment on one of my poems. thanxs
    -harley-

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

    Its very good and i love it keep up the good work

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