Today i broke!

by TeArS R FaLLiNg   Oct 9, 2005


I feel that no one knows me
no one understands how i feel
people assume that i am happy
but this person you see is not real
i just feel so ALONE
like my identity has been stripped bare
and that people DO notice me
but they just fail to care
i am not selfish and i know that
the world does not revolve around me
but is it too much to ask
that you look deeper and try to see
that i love you all so much
but still feel rejected
and i care oh so much
but am still neglected
i tried to express how i feel
but people just turned away
i was too much effort
and they did not know what to say
so then i acted like someone else
someone that was happy
acted like i was over the past
no longer being snappy
but today i broke
the disguise did not last
so now you see i am sad
and can not handle the past
you must think i am crazy
because of all the things i do
you must also think i am weak
but that is what i think to!!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Serendipity08

    Sometimes I feel weak too, so I understand, but don't let other people's comments get to you, they probably don't know your situation.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    I like this, i feel that way too, it's really sad 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by unbelievable life

    Excellent poem...thanks for the comment on mine...i love comments lol...i love your poems theyre so great...
    XXX angel

  • 18 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    That was a good poem cos it showed the truth. A lot of people, especially people you think are your friends, do give up tryingt o help after a prolonged period of your unhappiness. Keepwriting! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by quietlybreaking

    A beautiful poem. you have portrayed your emotions brilliantly,

    and that people DO notice me
    but they just fail to care

    that bit just there hit me, i realise, after reading your poem, thta this is the case. people do notice another in pain and hurt, but stick their nose in the air and walk away.
    an old friend of mine had a stroke outside a shopping center, no one stopped to help, society today is so harsh.
    anyway, i am starting to babble.
    thankyou,aylz

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