Five Seconds

by Carmen   Sep 21, 2005


It's amazing,
What you can do in so little time.
Have some fun,
Drink some beer...
Risk it all.

Do what you want,
Hop in a car,
Prepare to do a stunt...
Throw it all away.

Get mad at a spouse,
Yell and scream and hit,
Anger fills the house...
It's all gone.

What happens to you later,
Is affected by what you do now.
All it takes is five seconds,
For your choices to let you down.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    So true, but I feel like you can do a little more . The flow was pretty off . You could add a little maybe, but overall, it`s nice (: There was some catchy thing about it, but it`s not totally out there `naa mean ?
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 18 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    Dis poem is excellent babe its really well written an i totally agree wiv u xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    I love it! I really like the ending too. 5/5 Good message ;D

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    I like the poem
    i voted it 5/5 because its got a lovely thought !!
    um.. i really like the ending too :-)
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Yup your so right keep up the amazing work girl 5.5

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