Soaken

by josh mills   Sep 23, 2005


Soaken with blood
from broken veins
i will name no names
i will not play games
I'm felling so many pains.
its crazy every things getting hazy
as i start to pale i realize I'm going
to hell.

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  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Josh, hm..that was good i guess. But it is missing a lot.. :( Im sorry to be so mean!! *runs away* Maybe if you add more graphics, and emotion it will be better. Hope to read more of your poems.

    -Jennifer.

  • 18 years ago

    by stlzhunii420

    I like it ,thxz forrating commenting on mine.
    always,
    xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Hey Josh ^_^
    I think it's more than ok...it's a really good poem, but may be you could add a little more to it, so, it won't be so short. Overall, it's a great poem and I like it 5/5 Take care and keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by josh mills

    I think its ok its not bad any way
    i hope u like it

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