Good -bye my love till we meet again

by Lu   Sep 23, 2005


I watched you each day
as you slowly faded away
I kissed your lips
felt your heart beating
so quietly
today I said
good-bye
as you breathed
your last breath
never to hear
your sweet voice again
never to hold you
and whisper I love you
too many tears to count
to much pain to bare
I touch your
now cold body
once so full of life
never to dance again
I say good-bye
my love
we will meet again
we were meant
to be together
there never will be
an end
****************************

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by neens

    Great write.
    ~neens~

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Heartfelt and touching...... saying goodbye is so hard, I hope your mom is doing better now with loss of her dear friend, help to keep the memories alive for her....... Beautiful but sad write Luanne.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Great job, a touching and heartfelt piece...

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Poems written through someone elses eyes seem to be the best written! Your such a terrific writer and I'm so glad I ge the chance to read your work..so sorry for the loss....but so happy I found another great writer to read! Keep it up Luanne, love the stuff!
    ~Chelsey~

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Lu