Storm

by Ashley Van Eperen   Sep 26, 2005


Echoing in the silence
Of my broken heart
Shadows of a stormy day
From a life thats torn apart

Beating against the window
Of my tattered soul
Raindrops come to freeze me
But I'm already cold

Ripples in the water
Like a memory they play
Reminding me of a time
When I didn't feel this way

Lightening strikes my body
Tearing me in two
Wanting to hold on
But not knowing what to do

A rumble comes to break me
Shattering my walls
I'm trying to hold on
But from this storm,
I do fall

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  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    You`re a great writer It was really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    I have no C.C. for you only because i really liked the whyme scheme and the story line. i enjoyed your metaphores aswell.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Wow..I feel the same way EVERYDAY of my life. I hope u get happier and dont get stuck all sad like me! So cheer up gizmo =D

    Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wonderful work. You have great imagery and flow in this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dave

    Great job i loved your 3rd part that read
    "Lightening strikes my body
    Tearing me in two
    Wanting to hold on
    But not knowing what to do" I just love that line rolls of the toung and makes me feel good after i say it

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