What can you see

by dyingbrokenangel   Sep 26, 2005


Look into my eyes,
what can you see,
eyes full of pain,
or eyes full of joy?

Look into my heart
what can you see,
a heart thats been broken,
or a heart thats been loved?

Look hard on my wrists,
what can you see,
a wrist full of scars,
or a spotless skin?

Look at me,
what do you see,
a girl who's depressed,
or having a time of her life?

did you see pain, did you see a broken heart, did you see scars and a girl who's depressed?

Or can you only see the fake me,
the joy, the spotless skin, the girl having the time of her life?

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  • 18 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Omg!!!! this is soooo incredibly amazing!!!!!! like i'm not even kiding! how did u get the idea to come up with this?!?! your so talented! and im so jealous!!! haha anyway keep up the amazing work!!!! love you~lex

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Love it!!! thank you sooo much for your comment, it really means so much :D keep up the great work!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    I loved this...can relate...you're on my favourites!!!
    take care hun...i can tell you're loved ...
    chin up x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole Maree

    Awesome poem, I could really relate to it. Thanks for the comment on my poem. And keep up the great work. Luv Nicole =)

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Wow this is like me when i read it i thought of my self lol.. i hope you ok girl keep up you head you make it. 5.5

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