If You Only Knew

by TragicRomance   Sep 28, 2005


Now her life is going down,
never to have a smile, always a frown;

People think it\'s easy, but they just don\'t know,
how hard it is, and how bad she wants to go;

Her friends look up to her, and think everythingk okay,
they just don\'t know what she goes through every day,

People arond her won\'t stop dying,
they don\'t know she can\'t stop crying;

People are invios and jealous of her too,
they wish they were her, but if they only knew;

She tries to make her life look so very perfect,
but she knows now that nothing is worth it;

She can\'t control the voices inside of her head,
now she wishis nothing, but to be dead;

Now she is out of her so called life,
she ended it with just a touch of a knfe;

Her life was nothing but pure he;;,
but no one was there to catch her when she fell;

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dave

    Wow gfreeat meaning and flow need no work i loved it keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Wow, your a very good writer. i can picture a story when reading your poems. good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I think you can say the word HELL i dont think it would land you in explicit
    but great job i think your vocab needs to be improved though

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Sad..yet cute, its very well written,

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Well written dark poem