Your Grip

by midnight♥lullibys   Sep 28, 2005


Your grip tightens with every scream
I feel as though I am in a dream

Though I cant wake up this time
No matter how far I try to fly

As time passes i get no where
Sick of the dark, it's starting to wear

Visions of violence begin to flash
As my future turns to ash

Why Must it be like this, and why me
How is it that in a crowd i can feel lonely

Now matter how i cry, you dont care
Just let me be happy if you dare

Do you even know that feeling
In school, and tears come without warning?

Everyone will want to know whats wrong
While the guidence just says "stay strong"

No one can help, I've dug myself too deep,
Into this bleek grave, where i Sleep

The darkness cant be over come,
So here in your grip I am so lonesome...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Very nice job.. i really enjoyed reading your poems this one has a ver nice flow 5/5 nice job overall i would say 4/5! nice job though

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Wow i love this mainly cuz i been here and felt like this, you did amazing job and the rhymeing was great. keep up the good work and thanks for all you comments and votes.. 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay this wasnt one of your best i dont think there were places where yourr rhymes were way off and it just didnt flow right for me

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    It's outstanding!

    I heart the poem.

    "Now matter how i cry, you dont care"

    "Now" should be "No" =)

    My favourite lines are:

    "Why Must it be like this, and why me
    How is it that in a crowd i can feel lonely"

    And

    "
    No one can help, I've dug myself too deep,
    Into this bleek grave, where i Sleep"

    Kudos to you M'Dear.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job. i really like this one. You are very talented i have to say. I really think that this poem was very sad and very true. I mean everyone person you talk to about anything like your consulor(spelled wrong ooopps) at school or something "oh it's okay stay strong everything will be okay" and they don't understand but i think if you talk to a friend or something there will understand and i do hope your okay. Also i'm here for you if you need someone to talk to. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

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