My dream has been blown away

by dyingbrokenangel   Sep 30, 2005


Poetry is my only friend,
my way to let anger out,
my way to write down how i feel,
without letting out tears,
but i just don't feel,
i do well enough,
my poems don't satisfy me,
my poems are so dull and boring.
every single day i am feeling worse,
as my poems keep going down,
why can't i wrote fantastic poems,
where i get 49 comments,
why cant i blow everyone away,
with my wonderful poem,
i guess i don't have talent,
my dream has been blown away,
one day to be a famous poet,
i cant see it going my way

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Aww hun i lOVE YOUR POEMS!!!:) so do a lot of people... you'll be an amazing poet older, if you want it hard enough. Don't give up and stay strong babe.
    luv ya!!
    >anna x x

  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    Dont give up darling..we al love you i dont want to let you fall...read my poem "my angels,"

    your one of my angels hunni you knwo that

    -angel-
    love ya

  • 18 years ago

    by Tine

    I understand you, I feel the same way. But, hey, if it makes you feel better, you're in my list of favourites, and I believe that you have talent.

    -x-

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Never give up hope. this poem is lovely, everthing was ace:) keep it up, write for the sake of writing and dont worry about everything else.

    Umm thankyou very very much for that comment it meant alot to me, have you commented on your other account before? *very sorry if you have and I cant place you:S*

    Stay Strong
    Jenn x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    Keep writing your dream isnt out of your hands you can do whatever you want to do

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