Hate this if you want too

by Dave   Sep 30, 2005


Things in this life i never knew
time slipping away and fading from you

your heart will stop bleeding some day i know
but until then not a kind word will show

things i have done were never good enuff for you
so piss off go to hell and try something new

my love for you grows deeper everyday
then i ask you to give me one reason to stay

you hate everything that i have ever done
so hate this is you want to just give me my gun

this is my plee to all that want to hear
now my life is gone and you have nothing to fear

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  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Hmmm... I understand that this is probably a poem you wrote to get out hurt feelings, But it's one of those blunt, 1st person emotional rant poems. Also the ryme sounds forced, which disrupts the flow. good emotion though!

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