The girl i love
by shawn hoskins Oct 1, 2005
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You know i would never turn my back on you, especially after all we have been through, i know your down, you sounded so sad on the phone last night, it brings tears to my eyes when i tell you everything is going to be alright, i know you've been broken so i send you hope through soft words spoken, i hope you listen and stay away from the demons that are calling, don't worry i'll be right by your side to pick you up when you have fallen, and theirs no reason for me to keep denying, it's tearing me apart watching the girl i love slowly dying. |
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18 years ago
by aDORKable x3
Wow that was really good! i liked it a lot...I know the feelin' but from the girls point of view...
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18 years ago
Great write , the only suggestion I would make is when you write them section off each stanza It'll make it easier for ppl to read your poems
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18 years ago
by NannO
Aww.. that was so sweet and deep.. i lykd ur rhyme and ur poem's words, they go deep in the heart.. it was reli sad and it brot tears to my eyes as i read it.. ur a gr8 writer. Keep up the good work!
take care
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18 years ago
by Ksusha
That so sweet and sad at the same time
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18 years ago
~*Aww that was so sweet n so sad at the same time....who ever that gurl is shes really lucky 2 have a guy like you....well keep up the work, ur a great writer*~ XoXo
