Pain and Stains

by Chris   Oct 1, 2005


This is kind of written more like a song... in way. but whatever.

pills in my system
just to numb the pain
a simple clean cut
that doesn't leave a stain

and by the end of the day
will i still feel this way
I'm telling myself no
just make it stop
but you don't even know
you don't even know

so the drugs numb the pain
and a broken heart
leaves the stain
but you don't even know
you cant even tell
I'm just not doing so well
but you don't even know
you don't even know

after sixty something pills
i still feel the pain
and the crimson colored blood
leaves the worst of stains
but you don't even know
couldn't figure it out
you still ask yourself
what it was about

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  • 18 years ago

    by iwanttobalone

    Wow. chris.. ignore what that one chick said. the words REPEAT cuz its a SONG. yea...

    anywho. i loved it, as usual. so yes.

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Hmm this is pretty good. There is too much repitition of the words pain,stain, and "but you don't even know" which makes them loose some of their power. The rhyme scheme is random, and inconsistant, which throws off the flow. Its good other than that

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