Sadness

by Dave   Oct 1, 2005


A face that i will not see
a love that was taken from me
there was not one breath that came from your face
and now you have been pulled from this place
with no name but a number on your grave
there is nothing left in my mind to save
i turn to the light but see only dark
i can see the end but not in my heart
he is my lost soul my youngest son
i turn for help cold eyes will run
my empty pockets are filled with my hands
questioning gods unreasonable plane
I'm longing for the day my sadness will end
i know my broken heart will never mend

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!love the emotion and its was so sad.. great expressing ur feelings to this poet... 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw, Wow. This was sad. I hope it's not true..

    There's nothing I can find wrong in the piece. I thought it was written really well. Keep it up =) 5/5

    `Taleee.

  • 20 years ago

    by Sourav

    That's so sad! But must say this is a well written poem.

  • 20 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Again, nise poem. This is really different to the poem of yours i read. You've still expressed yourself well but in a different way and this is actually really sad !!!
    It's beautifully written though and i like it alot.

    XxX Cici XxX

  • 20 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww this is so good... Your writing is SOOOO much better than mine... lol... mine pretty much.. like sucks... but you are older than me... hmmm... yes you are new here and you have MORE comments than me... lmao... thats pretty funny... well i'll ttul dave...
    jessica

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