Alone and lost...

by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~   Oct 2, 2005


At this moment,
I feel as though the time has stop,
Only me,
And no one else,
Is to be seen.

I was left alone,
Again and again,
Alone with nobody,
Nobody to talk to,
Nobody to play with,
Nobody to share my grief.

Somehow,
Someway,
Everyone has vanish,
And I am too,
Slowly fading away,
I checked the house,
There wasnt anyone,
I walked around the neighborhood,
There wasnt a single soul,
I walk and walk,
And run and run,
But no matter where I go,
Or where I reach,
I am still alone,
By myself,
No one to cry to,
No one to shout at,
And no one to fight with.

This is just my life...

Im alone,

abandoned,

and neglected,

Im lost,

Right now,
in you

*i wrote this quite sometime ago, so it's not very good, just thought you guys can comment on it and tell me what you think...okey.*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Good poem.Really felt the emotion.and it isn't ridiculous.

  • 18 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    Arrr this was well good, I liked it a lot. Took me a while to read it all but got there in the end lol! Well done

    Peace xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Aw hun, its good, but somethings off and i cant put my finger on it, maybe play with the format and wording? but either way 4.5/5:) awesome work.

    Thankyou so much for the mention your a sweetie! keep up the great work

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey just wanted to say thankyou for the comment, you have no idea how much it means..its so weird that someone that i dont really know wants to help, but the people i am supposedly close to turn a blind eye!!! it sucks hey!!! i will be okay, ive been putting up with it for ages and that parts of my problem-tht i dont open up and talk-caz it hurts too much but i appreciate your kindness it means alot, email me if youre allowed xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Omg, i loved this it was excellent xxx

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