I had a crush on you

by Juls   Oct 3, 2005


I had a crush on you but you just broke my heart. I thought we had it all but now I see the truth. I didn't want to believe you but I guess I did, I'm not good enough for you so I wrote you a poem on my wrist.
I cried all night long and cried myself to sleep..just because of you. I saw you in school and you gave me the hugs that I love but this time was different. I cried in your arms.
I didn't care who saw my bright red eyes but one thing I didn't want them to see was my broken heart.
You told me it would be OK but I didn't think it would. All I wanted was you. Was that to much to ask, well I guess it was. Everything was a lye and the sweet things you said. You were the first one to break my heart, Oh aren't you glad?

Love Juls

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  • 18 years ago

    by Betty Boop

    This sounds like my X~husband...... you are great @ writtne... keep it all up gall.....

  • 18 years ago

    by *Baby Angel *

    That was a kool poem

  • 18 years ago

    by snowboots firefighter

    WOW! VERY DEEP. I HATE TO SAY IT BUT *SIGHS* YOU WILL GET YOU HEART BROKEN BY BOYS ALOT. MOST OF US ARE HEARTLESS AS_SHOLES. bUT HEY I AM NOT ONE OF THEM SO IF YOU EVER NEED TO KNOW HOW BOYS THINK LOOK ME UP. oK

    mUCH LOVE SNOWBOOTS.

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Hey hun sori to hear dat..hope u ok now u get your third hug now *huggles* lol keep up da gwd work kk

  • 18 years ago

    by JynX

    That was a pretty good piece of work...I've heard worse and i've heard better....but overall I like it alot ::shrug:: but then again it's just my opinion

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