Suicide Moon

by Rusted x Heart   Oct 4, 2005


The cool comfort of a blade
sinks in throughout the cold veil
of a solitary, darkened night,
piercing the silence with relief,
flooding ones' mind with thoughts...

...Thoughts of the Moon, in its lonesome gaze,
of the stars unknowingly flooding it
in a multitude of monochromatic life,
one less ordinary, thought to be
less deserving, less alive.

That, the Moon, dangles upon a thread
above all to see but out of reach.
For things as such are not meant to be held,
just meant to be viewed, for no one to posess,
for its own life it doesn't own.

But soon the sun will outshine the moon
painting with light all it sees
like the very blood that trickles from the wrist of one
that bleeds for forgiveness and love.
But the night will forget as the day it smiles.

The Moon can't be kept for longer,
it dies as the day it is born, she goes unwanted,
and for one last night she shines over us,
painting all she sees red, for tonight
she bids us adieu as she vanishes into eternal day.

03/10/05

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Beautiful and haunting. I wrote a comment before but it didn't show =[

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    You've got a brilliant talent with words mate! Your flow is amazing and discriptions really paint a metal picture of the scene you're writing about; a sign of a good poet. I loved the contrasting comments about the sun and the moon which were done beautifully. Your poem was an excellent read!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    You amaze me still it is soo gooood
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Pretty cool poem. Heh, reminds me of the one I just wrote, has to do with the moon and suicide and stuff. Awesome job.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    It seems there is little i can say that has not been said. once again your poem conjers up the most exquisite images when read. the consept of the moon dieing each night gives the poem a dark edge, and once again your skill with metaphores really takes this poem to the top.
    brillient work

    Ruby