Cant you all see??:'(

by midnight♥lullibys   Oct 5, 2005


Cant you see I'm hurting
Inside this body, Burning
Wishing to be someone else, yearning
Cant you see I'm hurting?

When will this heart ache end
When will I find that one true friend
That will be there each road bend
And in time of need helping hand she'll lend

The walls are quickly closing in around me
In this vast ocean of tears you'll see,
All the things I wish I could be
Joyfully, Poetic, Pretty, or Free...

My past has yet to be forgot
All my mistakes, yeah I've made a lot
Every argument or fight I fought
Led me right here, not at all what I thought

I wish I could glimmer and shine like the rest
Make people laugh and be one of the best
But the thought brings pain to my chest
For sorrow that will never rest

All other girls just stride with confidence
Like they make the world fit, make sense
Oh if only I could be the one to get a chance
To be fought over just to go to a dance

Cant you see I'm hurting
Inside this body, Burning
Wishing to be someone else, yearning
Cant you see I'm hurting?

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  • Awwwwwwwwwww this is beautiful and alsooo veryyyyyyy sad...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by fallentears

    Another amazing poem. keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Lol didnt mean to confuse you i hit the wrong button it 5/5! lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Nice job.. liked reading this one. 5/5! it had a nice flow and rhyme scheme but two of the rhymes were "weak" or so to speak but nice job 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    The over all poem was good but to me it seem to be forced wth rhyme, and that take away from the poem in my eyes. but it was still an amzing poem and you get a 5

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