by midnight♥lullibys Oct 5, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Cant you see I'm hurting |
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Awwwwwwwwwww this is beautiful and alsooo veryyyyyyy sad...5/5 |
by fallentears
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Another amazing poem. keep writing. |
by Britney
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Lol didnt mean to confuse you i hit the wrong button it 5/5! lol |
by Britney
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Nice job.. liked reading this one. 5/5! it had a nice flow and rhyme scheme but two of the rhymes were "weak" or so to speak but nice job 4/5 |
by XxTeArSxX17
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The over all poem was good but to me it seem to be forced wth rhyme, and that take away from the poem in my eyes. but it was still an amzing poem and you get a 5 |