This Note

by x-Beth-x   Oct 5, 2005


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I gave you my heart,
You had the choice,
Love me forever,
Or tear it apart,

You made the wrong choice,
You chose to hurt me,
You didn't care how I fealt,
You chose you let me go free,

My friends say forget him,
Hes to good for you,
Tof find someone better,
Find someone new,

But I can't do that,
To him,
My heart is still attached,

So that is why I lay here,
Cutting myself to pieces,
I watch as the blood flows down,
I watch as I'm about to leave this,

Life for me,
Is now comming to an end,
I'm finally fed up,
To you this note I send,

I'm sorry mum,
I'm sorry dad,
I'll mis you both,
Soon I'll be dead,

So I write this note,
To say I'll miss you,
And I love you so,
See you soon, again some day,

I love you,
Sorry this had to be,
I just couldn't take it,
Now, I am free

~Anarchy

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  • 18 years ago

    by ...:NiKi:...

    I love how the poem shows the emotions behind it.. very well written.. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nightschild

    What a sad but beautiful poem
    very well written
    a definite 5/5
    xoxoxox
    ~*MaRy*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This was an awesome poem i really know how you feel on this one, but on this stanza

    My friends say forget him,
    Hes to good for you,
    Tof find someone better,
    Find someone new,

    when you said he's too good for you did you mean your too good for him? cause i mean if you didnt the next line needs to be changed cause it contradicts it so yeah thats all though 5/5 for sure

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Omg that is a gr8 poem....!!! u have a fabulous gift..i hope u use it throughout ur life...wow...i totally no how u feel...blieve me!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by JLT

    Good poem sweets. I'm glad i got to talk to you again. Keep up the good work babe *hugs*

    ~Jessica

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