Enough

by Sourav   Oct 6, 2005


Enough of this crazy run
Now it's no more fun
Every moment my soul gets burned
Though still I don't know where to turn

But enough of this fury & madness
It's certainly now a hopeless case
Dreams are gone without a trace
And who is crying is anybody's guess

How can one live with the broken faith
Can't distinguish life from death
As life takes its last breathe
What I've become in loves sake!

Tears of anguish and pain
Now it seems all went in vain
Everything to lose nothing to gain
What I got is total disdain

I just wanted love that is true
May be that's too much to ask from you
Now I feel so lost and have no clue
Don't want to live life with this blue

Life is crying and love is lost
Living with the tired thought
Fighting a battle that is already lost
This is the end; I'm trapped & caught

Enough of this living on the edge
Now I can't kiss this frenzy & rage
Is this a curse or just my fate
And I don't know whom to hate!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Very nicely written
    Some excellent comparisons in this poem with very heartfelt wording
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by love spectacular

    Hey, thanks for the comment. i really do appreciate any feedback i get on my writing, seeing how new i am and all.

    you're an excellent writer. it takes talent to so successfully express things such as that. as many have said, i too can relate to much of this poem, after subtracting the love element.

    fighting a battle that is already lost
    ^absolutely love that line!

    hope you're doing ok, keep up the spectacular work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Steve V

    Excellent thoughts composed and very well received. Keep up the great work & thank you for the kind comment.
    Peace =o)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow unrequited love, its so hard to deal with and your poem says it all....beautifully written souray, thank you for taking the time to look at my work.

    **Lis**

  • 18 years ago

    by Greta Miller

    Hey thanks for commenting on my poem!! yours are excellent as well, do you have an email? i love talkn to new people

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