Raindrops fall

by brit   Oct 6, 2005


Raindrops fall against the glass
as I try to let my anger pass,
what was it I did so wrong
that made you cause me so much harm,
I see the look upon your face
as you throw the flower vase,
in no time at all the sparkle in your eyes
turns to something else & makes me cry
I wish that you could look and see
what this pain is doing to me,
all I want is to be loved
much more time for kisses and hugs,
but because you refused to turn and see
i don't want us to even be,
raindrops fall against the glass
as I try to let my anger pass,
raindrops fall against my face
it's time for you to be erased.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ~*JESSiE*~

    Wow you can write really good poems!!!!!!! i love this one though!!!! it was very cool!!! keep it up!

    XoXoXo
    JESSiE

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child

    Woah! loved the last two lines, and how you brought back the first to into the ending. very effective. i really liked this poem! good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by jac

    Yea, you do have great talent when it comes to writing! this poem was really touching, and i know how you feel, really.. keep up the great work, and check out some of my poems if you get the time.. stay strong!

  • 18 years ago

    by asia[imperfection] is alone in the world

    This is a really good poem i like it. you have a real talent for this.

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