Lost

by ScarletHaze   Oct 7, 2005


Its amazing how much i feel lost and alone
even when in a crowd of people
but being in a crowd doesn't help
if anything it makes you more lost.

i'm fed up of all the taunts about the fact i used to cut.
it seems that even though i quit i will forever be an outcast
the freak.

i'm just so tired of being on my own
everyone thinking they understand me when they don't.
at times i just feel so low
i want to go back to the blade and that crimson kiss.

but i know i can't as it hurt way to many people other than me.
i don't want them to get hurt again
so it seems i'm still lost alone and without the help of my shining silver knight.
who is responsible for so many others demise.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Ok...get over that shining silver knight...you know you are not alone...that's good...so..stay strong hun...

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    I want to go back to the blade and that crimson kiss.

    i LOVED this line, its really powerful, i can relate fully to this.
    It's beautifully written, it's very personal and it reads really well.
    5/5

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Great poem...

    Blade isn't the solution to all
    It won't make you stand
    It'll help you fall....

    Stay strong at heart and things will go just fine... good work

    Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Awww hun, stay strong!! i glad you gave up the blade, very very relieved. beautiful poem as always. keep it up!
    -xXx-
    P.S. didn't mean to make you think of throwing your porcelain dolls out :P lol

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