Ecstatic Tears

by Atomic   Oct 8, 2005


Sweet caresses of the night.
A seductive whisper there.
Pair of eyes taking in sight.
A stroke of luscious hair.

Cuddling in the center.
When spaces are abound.
Rough hands became gentler.
Speaking with no sound.

Nibbling a familiar place.
Soft sighs rang loud and clear.
Back to chest; face to face.
Taste of ecstatic tears.

Skin against skin, burning.
An obsession of wanting more.
Depths of stomach churning.
Clothes lies limply on the floor.

Eyes met eyes for the first time.
Seeing what was not there before.
A mirror hidden behind the shine.
This is love, the eyes are sure.

Following a trail of butterfly kisses.
A golden arch of her elegant back.
Moon lit night of granted wishes.
Time consuming, thrown off tracks.

A single night of wonderful bliss.
Forever and a day of remembrance.
On the morrow, nothing is amiss.
Never again this hypnotic trance.

Awoken by the morning light.
Reaches over and captured air.
Memories of the previous night.
The ecstasies they had shared.

Playing oblivion for a while.
Nothing has the aspect it use to.
Greets the world with a broken smile.
Writing poems with ink so blue.

Awaits patiently for a twist of fate.
Another chance, just one more time.
Pulsing heart, blocked by iron gates.
Its keys are these poetic rhymes.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!©

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  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    Good emtotion
    ~shanny~

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    This poem was great, but isn't it in the wrong place? I really like the poem but I think there is one verse that throws me off, call me stupid but:

    A single night of wonderful bliss.
    Forever and a day of remembrance.
    On the morrow, nothing is amiss.
    Never again this hypnotic trance.

    I dunno, it's most likely just me, rembrance and trance seems forced, they rhyme in lettering but not when you say it, because most people say it like:
    Remembrence

    so with remembrance and trance they have to say

    RemembrANCE

    Great poem though.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Nice. very intense for the first half, then as the poem moved on to the next day, cooling off. great work, nice flow and style

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Fabulous again. u cood go sumwhere with ur poetry. seriously. keep up the gr8 work!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by sami

    Thats really good
    keep it up