The dead game

by мσяιтυяαм   Oct 8, 2005


Plunge the knife
twist it round
listen to
that squelching sound
watch the blood
come gushing out
you're having fun
thats what murders about
tear to shreads
my evening dress
knock me about
make a mess
hold me down
dig in your nails
this Technique
never fails
now im dead
do what you will
the fun doesn't stop
because you've made your kill
i can't fight back
im free to rape
so you can f**k
my lifeless shape
call a friend
when you're done
now it's their turn
to have some fun.

all rights reserved, © Laurène Ferguson 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    Very blunt I'm sorry if it's true... hmmm..... but you did a good job as a poet... trying to write something happy but feel depressed after reading that.... so you know now that your writing can affect situations and people... EXCELLENT!

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Nice poem, really good description and a good use of words.

    Thanks for your comment on my poem, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww hun, beautiful poem, you did a great job with this, very expressive and I felt like I was watching a movie while I was reading it, awesome keep it up lubb you

  • 18 years ago

    by jac

    That's really... descriptive. i liked it. it flowed really well. keep it up!

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