Miss You(revised)

by Emma   Oct 10, 2005


I miss the way you touched my hair,
I miss the way you'd always care,
I miss your welcoming touch,
I have never missed anyone this much.
I miss the way you said "i love you"
and the way you said "good-bye"
Now that i dont hear your voice it makes me want to cry.

I miss those movies we completely ignored,
I miss kissing when it snowed and poured,
I miss opening my eyes to see your face,
I miss being in your arms, my favorite place...
I miss your eyes and i miss your smile,
please say you'll come back for a while.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Wow emma. Like i said you have a lot of talent. Don't stop writing. I really like this poem. Once again, I like how it told your true feelings. Good job
    -JamieJay-

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww hun, I can relate to this right now tooh, I am gonna go to school today though and I get to see the boy I love but it still wont be the same, he's probably over me after how I Acted, bleh, love smucks, LOVELY poem though hehe

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    Wonderful flow emma! (teehee)...i loved this and understand how u feel!

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Once again...a masterpiece. I just love how you can say everything in such a short way. I want to thank you for writing what I can't! Please...keep writing; you're one of my favorites!

  • 18 years ago

    by facedownindirt

    Aww sweetie this is soo good... and to who ever its about... i no how you feel life can be a beach!!! lol but this poem was wonderful... it had a great flow and really good ryming! good job keep it up!

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