Me now

by Amanda   Oct 11, 2005


I am all alone and feeling weak,
I just look at the sky and stare,
Wondering where I went wrong,
Asking why won't people care?

I have been disowned and rejected,
By people I love with my heart,
They could not handle the depression,
Now we have drifted far apart,

I did not mean a single word,
When I said some hurtful things,
I want them to come back to me,
Lets just see what my life brings,

I am so very sorry to them all,
But my heart is in great pain,
I want them to understand me,
And be my best friends again,

I want to be supported by them,
Giving reassurance to me too,
Tell me that I will be alright,
Helping to get me through,

I do not want to feel so lonely,
I want to see a friendly smile,
Want to know someone loves me,
And just hug me for a while,

I want them to wipe my tears away,
I want them to be proud of me,
I want to be my old self again,
The happy person they used to see.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Quite similar to the courage insie as far as a topic, but it manages to take on a differnt angle. very well written, and a wonerful range of words used. well done

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer Fox or Jackson

    Good poem...i know how you feel...trust me things will turn out for the best....5/5...keep up the great work, jen

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    We all have said things that we dont mean and want to take back. This poem is true. I hate when i do that,
    your a good writer who expresses her feeling through poetry. i like when people can do that and i can feel how they feel inside.
    I read some more but didnt comment, if you want me to then tell me and i will. sorry!

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Awww Amanda I am so sorry, i just want you to be happy....I relate somehow.

    I am all alone and feeling weak,
    I just look at the sky and stare,
    Wondering where I went wrong,
    Asking why won't people care?

    DON'T ever say that, you are so not alone and I really DO care about you, don't you ever forget hun....Please be strong for all of us, you will get through this depression, i promise yu.

    *All of my love, sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    They will come back girl, don't worry. Even if they don't, someone will.

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