Have you ever felt

by ..::Angel of your darkness::..   Oct 14, 2005


Have you ever felt empty?
Like there's nothing inside
The whole world is your enemy
And from it you must hide

And even when it's warm
Rain on you pours
You're in your own world
Hidden behind doors

Weakened on the inside
And bleeding on the outside
No one knows your pain
No one knows you cry

Sometimes there's the anger
Inside you it burns
For the pain you can inflict on yourself
Is what you often yearn

To feel so cold and lost
To no longer know who you are
Is one of the saddest things in life
By far

You sit in your room alone
Just slowly fading away
Suffering in your pain
That never goes away

We soon forget our hopes and dreams
That somehow keep us alive
So when we lose them
We often die

But its not up to us
too take away life
Through such things
as suicide

We shouldn't play God
if we die it's his choice
So listen to your own heart
not the devils voice

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  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    U read my mind... 5/5 great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by zadyrose

    Ohmy god it felt like you were talking to me and im so glad that i didnt die that last stnza was beautiful keep writing hun your awsome

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    Hey, I havent checked out your poems in like .... forever. Cuz I took a break I dont think you remember me anyways but this poem was good. I liked it. Like always.

    Nana

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade_romance666

    Wow i truly love this poem its really good keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Wow beautiful
    "We shouldn't play God
    if we die it's his choice
    So listen to your own heart
    not the devils voice"
    this part really spoke to me
    you did a really good job wiriting it
    well done

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