Because Of My Father...

by Spitfire   Oct 14, 2005


Because of my father

The love of my life

isn't a guy

isn't a girl

it isn't a person

its very cold

thats one reason i love it

but it does have blood on it

all over it

and the blood is mine

its sharp

and loves to hurt me

The love of my life

is my knife

true about me !
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  • 18 years ago

    by woody

    Dad's are fricken gay .. !! i hate them

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    I understand how you feel. we both have father problems...nice emotion shown

    XOXO
    Kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by Xxs0phxX

    OH:( Thats really sad huni....
    Stay strong. I hope your ok.
    really wel written
    love s0ph
    P.s thanks for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Wow, really short but really powerful.
    I can kinda relate to this, you've written this well, i liked it alot. Well Done !!!
    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by *BeAuTiFuLlY*iNaDeQuEtE*

    Hey
    thanx 4 commentin on mine it really means a lot!! its just pisses me off wen ppl tell me they undrstand when they have no idea! thi is really gd u hv a real talent!!! if u have time check out my poem save me its about the same thing
    love
    XxFeEBeDeExX

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