All I Want

by SoRrOwFuL Claire   Oct 15, 2005


PLEASE COMMENT(i need constructive critisism) AND VOTE THANX

Every single day I see you
And something deep inside
Wants to scream and tell you
That I can no longer hide

I want to tell you everything
Right from the very start
The way I feel about you and
The breaking of my heart

I truly want you to understand
The way I pine for you
The way I feel so lost inside
I don't know what to do

I want you to go through the way I feel
The emptiness depression and pain
Then you'd comprehend my loneliness
Which is more than words can explain

I want to feel that beautiful feeling
When you look in my empty eyes
And the way you always smile at me
That melts my black insides

I just need you to say right now
That I'm someone special in your world
That I am something beautiful to you
And that I'm your only girl

I want you to take me in your warm arms
And say everything is all right
All I want is for you to love me
So I can sleep peaceful at night

But just like every other day
You just wander straight by
And I'm too cowardly to stop you
But keep hatefully living a lie...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Amazing poem! Really well written. You seriously don't need constructive critism! But since you asked i'm gonna say something. You could use punctuation like comma's and periods. You don't have to though, a lot of poeple don't! lol! i don't....its still amazing without it!

    Anyway your poem is beautiful!! Never ever ever stop writing!! woot woot! 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    I am truely at a loss of words this time. you dont need constructive anything, your poems are beautiful and perfect.
    5/5
    take care,
    Keep strong,
    Love Tiffani

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    You dont need critisism don't be modest this is amazing and as long as u believe in yourself ull b brilliant n e way please comment and vote on some of mine.. love to ya girly xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Wow babe this is truely remarkable!
    nice work!

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    Good poem, the flow reminds me of my own... I will read more of yours.. I hope that this person you are talking about will one day fine you interesting. GOod luck...