Commeting Suicide

by AhmadAfaneh   Oct 15, 2005


I believe it's time to make a change
It's time to pass away
So I am using the chance
I am killing myself today

I have the blade in my hand
And I am filling the tub
I hang my clothes on the stand
Then I am lying in the hub

I hear the water drops falling
And I feel the hot water on my skin
The voice of conscience is calling
As if I am making a sin

I am taking the white towel
Covering my face
I intone my last poem
Singing my case

Suddenly I cut my wrist
Knowing that I did the best
Now it's over...it's the END
And i am dead.

The_Lonesome_89@hotmail.com
Ahmed_Afanah@yahoo.co.uk

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxxFull Of Painxxx

    Good one..very well said i like all of ur poems they have lots of emotion and pain in them and they all are very well said..beauitful work:)

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Hi hunny
    nice one
    i like the consistent flow=)
    5/5
    much love,

  • Woah... good rythm short but full of emotion
    kepp it up and stay strong