Today

by midnight♥lullibys   Oct 16, 2005


I sat down and cried today
Not sure why, happens everyday
I came back from jogging
It was cold and fogging
I sat down and cried today.

I punched my pillow and screamed today
I was just frustrated, like everyday
Just got done fighting with my father
Couldn't take the pain no longer
I punched my pillow and screamed today.

I made my sweetie cry today
Made some mistakes, I have to pay
For my actions of no reason
For getting down and drunken
I made my sweetie cry today

I hit a wrong vein today
So that now I have no say
Whether I live or Die
Please tell me why
I had to hit the wrong vein today

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    Wow...this is deep and i feel like that sometimes and i really don't know why but this is great 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    I liked this poem alot
    alghough I didnt get the whole meaning
    but its good
    keep it up
    Yours
    Nema
    XxXxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Dude you deffinately need to write another poem cuz you keep giving me comments then i have nothing to comment on cuz i alraedy got like all of yours!! lol so write another one like NOW! haha

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I liked it this poem. the way it started was brillient, and i like the way the first and last line of each stanza is the same. my favorite stanza has to be the opening one, it flowed so well.

    Brad

    P.S. feel free to trash another one of my poems, lol. i agree with you though on my poem 'the last time', there isn't anything specail about it...i just felt like writing something, lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    Related to you work ENTIRELY! Take care hun! Please see some of my poems too! xoxo

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