My Cruel Angel

by Lost & Delirious   Oct 16, 2005


There's tender freckles on your face,
Your dark eyelashes call my name,
Your perfect smile freezes my tears,
Silent voices scream my deep fears.

You're my cruel angel of the night,
You with her, that's the harmful sight,
When I see you two holding hands,
My heart turns into crumbling sand.

Your words about her are painful,
Please, say that you'll try to be careful,
Take your angel wings far away,
So I won't hate each and every day.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    Very well written! Keep writing, its very unique. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Wow....
    Very unique... i liked it alot. 5/5
    Very well written, great use of words.

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great emotions and descriptions

    ~Take your angel wings far away,
    So I won't hate each and every day.

    ~My favorite line

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awesome poem and i can totally realte to every part
    nice flow and awesome use of words
    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    Wow nice flow!!! great poem!!! Keep up the good work!!!! beautiful innovative imagination!!!!! I love it
    5/5 ^_^

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