Imminent

by CinnamonTwirl   Oct 18, 2005


I'd like to think my time will come
A time of contentment, belonging, and happiness
A time to give, and have it received
A time of optimism resulting from achievements
Achievements leading to success
Wanting nothing more than to "make it"
To prove naysayers wrong
To prove my thoughts wrong
To prove myself
Period
What does one do feeling failure is imminent?
Positivity is key...
...deceiving...but key

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This wasn't my favorite but i think you got a really strong point across in this one, the last two lines are my favorites, i love the way you word things, it's really unique and it seems as if it's natural for you to come with this stuff really cool

  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    I really like this poem.... Im new to the types of poems they are classsified as... such as a Kyrielle, which i like to write, free verse, you know all those types of things... i would think that this is free verse, and i just love these types of poems because the feeing is so raw and blunt, and so realistic. i love it... keep up the good work.. and can you please read some of my newest poems if u get time? i will without a doubt read your other work, as this one was just captivating..

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    This is unusual, more like thoughts than a poem, but I still really enjoyed it and everything you wrote is true. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Wow, that was awesome! I loved it, ver powerful meaning. 5/5 Great Job

    Best Wishes

    Saiya (Forever Saiya, different name)

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