Diagnosed With Life (Song)

by Rusted x Heart   Oct 20, 2005


Porcelain eyes,
Pretending to care,
An outstretched hand,
But no one is there,
An illusion of one's mind,
It's all a fact made of fiction,
This weakening strength,
Gives in to this addiction.

(Chorus)
I'll hide my scars
So that they can't see,
I'm diagnosed with life,
And its slowly killing me,
Addictive pain,
Comes unknowingly,
I'm diagnosed with life,
...And its slowly killing me.

Emotional wounds,
That tear one's soul,
A downwards spiral,
Spinning out of control.
Crash and burn,
Soon I'll hit rock bottom,
Its written in the stars,
I was meant to be forgotten.

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
The darkness of undying,
Anihilates sanity,
Don't blindfold life's perfection,
For there's nothing there to see.

(Chorus x2)

Porcelain eyes,
Pretending to care,
An outstretched hand,
But no one is there.

19/10/05

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  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Excellent another song i love it your such a great writer

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    What kind of music would you put lyrics like this to? And do you have music for this?.. I would like to know what it sounds like. Anyawys, awesome stuff

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Dang !!
    That would make a brilliant song .......

    The emotion in the wording is meaningful ...
    I hope to see it in the greatest hits sometime soon ...
    Brilliant poem~song....either way beautifully brilliant ...
    It seems that I have a new poet that has captivated my attention ...
    Incredible talent ....

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow that was incredible, it really was. what an excellent piece! keep it up 5/5 xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    Mate, this was truly an excellent song! It was full of emotion, and excellent wording and structure. The chorus is absolutely lovely and the imagery contained within is very original. Excellent poem, or song! Very well done indeed.

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